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And how hard it can be and necessary to carry that fierceness with us

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I am reminded of Monet's Cliff Walk at Pourville with his two young future stepdaughters painted above the sea walking at the edge on a sunny day. It was gifted to me by a boyfriend in Chicago and hung on my apartment wall until I gifted it to an incoming couple. The print disturbed me because I felt like I was cliff walking with him and I didn't want to take that feeling with me back to CA. This poem is fierce yet so gentle. The wind stroking the gull. I can feel it shaking me to my core but I don't feel afraid of how it could blow me apart from the inside out. This is a cleansing wind that fills my lungs with the breath of life. I can breathe more deeply after reading it. It depicts the Yin and Yang of life. No hidden agendas here. Raw and vulnerable. I love this poem.

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