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Melanie Kates's avatar

This is a gorgeous poem of embodiment.These beautiful words are a beaming gleam of transformative light helping to deliver us from becoming to being.

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Trude Scharff's avatar

Breathtaking! Beautiful…

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Connie Mygatt's avatar

Thank you David. Your poem is very timely. This morning I woke from a powerful dream that helped me realize it was time release memories and life patterns that no longer served me. I forgave people who were no longer in my life but who I still allowed to have power in my life. Your words were a confirmation that forgiveness and moving forward to a new or dreamed of life were open to me. Thank you.

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Steve's avatar

Quietly devastating

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Bonnie Ryan-Fisher's avatar

The perfect note to send to a friend today who is in some despair as time marches on and wishes remain out of reach. Thank you.

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Jime99's avatar

That is beautiful-

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Donna Elle's avatar

Such a magically hopeful piece of how the exquisite rhythm and balance of two opposing emotive ends can begin to land us in our body to taste the belonging of our future self. Fond of living on an edge all my long life I sit to be the one gazing out and feeling in. That exquisite tension draws me onward.

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Rocco Jarman's avatar

What a Master.

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